Lyrics to melody from Tears in Rain

I've written some words to the glockenspiel/vibraphone melody from Tears in Rain.  This comes from one of the final scenes of the movie where Roy Batty has a change of heart before he dies.  I had to change the music in the last line to make the words fit.  It feels a bit sacrilegious to put words to such a well known piece of music, particularly with the monologue that usually accompanies it.  However, I thought it would be nice to experience this moment in a new way so I hope you like it.

Stars shine brightly

At ten thousand feet

And their glitter

Fills my eyes

As I lay

Softly smiling

Not at my life

But the one thing

I'm most proud of

Is what I've become