Godzilla Movie

Godzilla: Origins [chapter 2]

Godzilla-Movies.com/forum/
Forum Topic
3663 Views9 Replies

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 7:54 AM

 *this story takes place 252 million years before the events of Godzilla(2014).

Chapter 2

"Sunlight"

Read chapter 1(parts 1 and 2) if you haven't!

 

After the incident with the strange insect creature the tall monster, that the newborn now recognized as a caregiver, seemed to be more paranoid than before. The giant would spend a lot more time near the entrance of, or in, the nest it had fashioned more than a year ago under the earth. The only time it would leave would be to hunt more food for its newborn or to go ward off any other monsters who came near its territory. 

 

      The tall monster watched as the newborn grew. The little monsters legs eventually grew sturdy enough to walk on and it hobbled to and fro throughout the nest. One day while the little one was sleeping, the taller animal heard a familiar rumble,a sound which terrified its species for centuries and it came from the surface. The giant gently, but quickly, grabbed it newborn from the next and,clutching the newborn to its chest, tunneled up to the surface.

 

      The newborn was shaken awake by a loud crunching sound, like rock being broken open. It looked around and saw nothing but darkness. It did, however, feel something pressing him to a warm surface and soon a bright, blinding light flooded its vision. After 5 min, the little one was able to see clearly again. The first thing it noticed was that it was being held in the tall monsters hand, the giant monster then slowly put the newborn on the ground. The newborn inspected its surroundings. It saw that it was on a grey rough surface, several giant spikey rocks extended for miles across grey floor. In the distance he saw a colossal structure. Even bigger than the tall monster, It looked like a large mountain and appeared to be emitting a black smoke, which covered the sky with darkness. 

 

While the newborn was taking this in, it suddenly heard a loud grunt. The tall monster had walked a few yards away and was signaling for the little one to follow. The newborn stood on its hind legs and instinctively followed its caregiver. They walked several minutes, the tall monster leading with the newborn directly behind it, when the tall one suddenly stopped. It sniffed the air, changing into a fighting stance, and gave a loud bellowing roar. The newborn felt the ground start to shake, it gave a squeal and latched on to the tall monster. 

 

     The ground suddenly broke open several feet away from them, creating a large hole in the ground.. The  tall monster gave a startled growl and backed away from it, protectively covering the youngling with its body. The creature that emerged from it looked similar to the insect creature the newborn encountered, but it was taller than the newborns parent and had 4 small arms in its underbelly. Its front two arms looked drastically different aswell, resembling giant claws than insect legs. It also had more defined eyes, which glowed orange. 

 

     The newmonster gave a loud cackling roar and faced the tall creature and its youngling. The little monster was pushed back by the tall one, who gave another mighty roar towards the insect-like creature. The insect growled and charged towards the parent, biting it in the neck with its mandibles. The caregiver roared and used its arms to pry the creature's jaws off of it. The insect hit its enemy with a slashing claw in its neck, the parent reeled back as visible blood could be seen coming from where it was struck. The parent suddenly and violently turned around, hitting the insect with its large tail. The new creature a thrown sideways to the ground. The parent took this opportunity to move to the newborn. The little one was hiding behind one of the many tall rocks. It squeaked in surprise when the tall creature scooped it up in its grey hands and tried to move quickly away from the insect creature.

 

The insect creature steadily got up of the ground. It looked over to where it could see the giant lizard starting to run away. It gave a roar of frustration and suddenly knelt to the floor. It then sprung up into the air, one of its large arms reeling back, and hit the tall lizard in the back. A loud boom could be heard coming from the insects claws, it was even louder than one of the giant lizards roars. The lizard gave a painful roar as several of its dorsal plates broke and it collapsed to the ground, dropping another, much smaller lizard..

 

The newborn got up from its painful fall. It found that its parent had not only dropped it but, in its momentum, accidentally thrown the newborn a few yards away. The newborn got up and looked back. It saw the insect creature giving a triumphant roar, the scary creature was standing over the newborns caregiver, who was laying down on its stomach. Its back spines looked as though they'd been snapped off. The tall creature lay still under the insect. The newborn hobbled away from the insect-like creature. It heard a loud breaking sound and the feeling of the ground shaking again. When it glanced back it saw that the insect creature and tall monster were gone. A large hole and several broken back plates were the only evidence they were ever there..........

 

 

 

Long chapter today because I didn't want to separate it into parts again. 

Post any questions or comments in the comments section below!

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"
9 Replies

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 11:36 AM

Also lemme know if you find any grammar errors

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"

Djdndnejwnwn

MemberGiganMar-12-2021 12:00 PM

After the incident with the strange insect creature the tall monster, that the newborn now recognized as a caregiver, seemed to be more paranoid than before. 

I won’t explain prepositions, or participles or the grammar everyone knows exists but don’t know what they do.

expecting the worst, sets you up for thr worst

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 12:24 PM

Ah, thx. I'll keep that in mind for the next chapter.

Reading back over it, I do that quite a bit, ill have to work on it. Sorry :(

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"

Djdndnejwnwn

MemberGiganMar-12-2021 12:27 PM

Your story is very good tho 

expecting the worst, sets you up for thr worst

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 12:57 PM

And your critiques will make it better! Thx :)

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"

Xenotaris

MemberGiganMar-12-2021 5:30 PM

I don't mean to nitpick but lizards technically didn't evolve until the mid-jurassic

ALIEN VERSUS PREDATOR UNIVERSE

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 7:25 PM

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"

G theorist

MemberBaragonMar-12-2021 7:25 PM

I was trying to make that segment from the perspective of muto prime herself

"Well of course gay men dress well, we don't spend all that time in the closet for nothing"

Xenotaris

MemberGiganMar-12-2021 7:36 PM

ah okay then

ALIEN VERSUS PREDATOR UNIVERSE
Add A Reply
Sign In Required
Sign in using your Scified Account to access this feature!
Email
Password
Latest Images
Godzilla & Kaiju Godzilla & Kaiju Fandom
Godzilla Movie Forums
Godzilla x Kong: The New Empire
Godzilla x Kong: The New Empire Discuss the Godzilla vs. Kong sequel here!
Godzilla Merchandise
Godzilla Merchandise Discuss Godzilla Toys & Literature
Godzilla Fan Works
Godzilla Fan Works Share Your Godzilla Fan Creations
Godzilla: Minus One
Godzilla: Minus One Discuss the Toho movie, Godzilla: Minus One here!
Godzilla
Godzilla Talk all things Godzilla, Pacific Rim, Gamera & more here
Monarch: Legacy of Monsters
Monarch: Legacy of Monsters Discuss the Monsterverse TV series on Apple TV here!
Godzilla 2014
Godzilla 2014 Discuss the Legendary Godzilla Series
Godzilla Video Games
Godzilla Video Games Talk and Compare Godzilla Games
Shin-Gojira
Shin-Gojira Discuss Shin-Godzilla here
Godzilla 2: King of the Monsters
Godzilla 2: King of the Monsters Discuss the Legendary Godzilla sequel here!
Godzilla vs. Kong (2020)
Godzilla vs. Kong (2020) Discuss the Godzilla vs. Kong Monsterverse movie here!
Hot Forum Topics
New Forum Topics
Highest Forum Ranks Unlocked
G. H. (Gman)
G. H. (Gman) » Godzilla
53% To Next Rank
Monsterzero9
Monsterzero9 » Anguirus
77% To Next Rank
Nicozilla
Nicozilla » Baragon
72% To Next Rank
KoldWarKid62
KoldWarKid62 » Baragon
43% To Next Rank
BigGMonsterMan
BigGMonsterMan » Baragon
33% To Next Rank
Latest Godzilla Fandom Activity
Godzilla Forum Teams

Godzilla-Movies.com is an information resource for fans looking to learn more about the upcoming blockbuster Godzilla: King of the Monsters. Providing the latest official and accurate information on Godzilla: King of the Monsters, this website contains links to every set video, viral video, commercial, trailer, poster, movie still and screenshot available. This site is an extension of the Godzilla Fandom on Scified - a central hub for fans of Godzilla looking to stay up-to-date on the latest news. Images used are property of their respective owners. Godzilla: King of the Monsters and its associated names, logos and images are property of and are in no way owned by Scified and its related entities. This is a fan-created website for the purpose of informing and exciting fans for Godzilla: King of the Monsters's release.

© 2024 Scified.com
Sign in
Use your Scified Account to sign in


Log in to view your personalized notifications across Scified!

Transport To Communities
Alien Hosted Community
Cloverfield Hosted Community
Godzilla Hosted Community
Jurassic World Hosted Community
Predator Hosted Community
Aliens vs. Predator Hosted Community
Latest Activity
Forums
Search Scified
Trending Articles
Blogs & Editorials