Final Battle Royale: Pacific Rim

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x_paden_x

MemberNoobFeb-16-2014 6:12 PM
Remember when I stated FBR was going to expand... (If you were on the jurassic world forum you might remember...) Anyways, I had a huge lack of things to do today, (Already watched the olympics re run about 3 times now... GO CANADA GO) So I decided to take up my idea on this. [i][u]Remember this is a trial.[/u][/i] A little on FBR, FBR or Final Battle Royale, was created to settle a debate between Rex and Spino, I've decided now that I'd try it with a jaeger and a Kaiju... Not a Whole lot of difference from a writers stand point but whatever... Lets see some stats... Coyote Tango VS Onibaba Coyote Tango [img]http://cdn.bloody-disgusting.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/pacific-rim-poster-coyote-tango.jpeg[/img] Weapons: Two Large cannons, 9 rounds, Automatic Enhanced metal alloys around fists for strength Energy Caster Self Destruct: Destroys the core in worst case scenario Pilots: Stacker Pentecost Tamsin sevier Onibaba [img]http://static1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130716145710/pacificrim/images/e/ec/Onibaba_Profile.jpg[/img] Weapons: Huge Pincer like claw Toxic spike barbs Whatever else crabs do... Location: Tokyo, Japan It was a quiet day in Tokyo, The sun was shining, The city was bustling with life... It all went to hell after that. A category Two kaiju landed in the city, Destroying everything in its path. Two hours had passed since the kaiju landed... In the distance you could here the rhythmic thumping of Around 20 Boeing Vertol Sea Knights helicopters underneath the squadron of air craft, Lay a giant metal man, A coyote painted on its right shoulder. The Oni roared in a hellish sound, which resembled that of clicking. It took up a defensive stance, Its claws pinching in the air as the jaeger touched down with a large clang. Stacker began flipping switches as their jaeger hit the ground, he looked over to his co-pilot, Tamsin, she smiled back at him through her helmet. "Category two Dead ahead, Lets take 'em down" She chuckled as they began to operate the Jaeger. Moving in complete sync through the drift. Oni Stared at this metal abomination in front of it... Did they believe this is all it took to defeat it? It thought, not wanting to risk this creature beating it, It quickly... Um... Crawled on its crab like legs, each on breaking and destroying the road below it. Coyote tango got into a fighting stance, her main turrets propped up from her shoulders, They opened up. Several explosions echoed through the jaegers main guns, shaking the Giant Mech violently. The smoke cleared and the Jaeger stood alone in the street. "Somethings not right..." Stacker said... Suddenly the jaeger was struck from behind, on the right, where a humans left side of the ribcage would be. The jaeger fell to the street, her crew inside, she smashed into the dirt. The Oni's claw began trying to snap the right barrel off of Coyote. Inside of the ****pit, Stacker opened his eyes, The ****pit was full of sparks and red lights, he looked over to his co pilot, she lay, against a nearby wall, as if she was thrown from her stand. Stacker could see she was Unconscious just by a glance, When he was serving with the RAF he went through a pilot down course... He Earned top grades in that class. He could hear the clicking of the beast, it was a distance away, there was, a quiet, single scream, and the sounds of buildings being crushed. He quickly disconnected himself from his safety equipment and harness, he dropped to the glass canopy of his Jaeger. He smacked into it, The reinforced glass didn't break. He rushed to his co-pilot and held her in his arms, his helmet beside him. "Tamsin?" He asked, She weakly opened her eyes, they fluttered... "Get the Bastard..." She said weakly, smiling as she fell unconscious again. Stacker quickly picked her up, slung her over his shoulder and kicked open the emergency door. He jumped out. Near where his Jaeger fell, was a safety bunker for a Kaiju attack. He opened the door and was greeted with the faces of many people, staring at him scared. He asked them to get her to a hospital in broken Japanese. One of them, Who was dressed in a PPDC uniform nodded and broke out a medical kit. Stacker ran to the downed Jaeger, he jumped through the open hatch, locking it behind him and climbed into his harness. He could hear the scream and destruction... He did something he was told not to do... Pilot the Jaeger alone. He pressed a panel nearby, and the machine lit up with life. With much force, he managed to get coyote on her knees, using a nearby building to help get up, coyote was on her feet and moving again. Convinced Oni Had destroyed the Metal "thing" it continued on its way, A single human caught its attention, it chased it into an alley. Where Oni was now, trying to catch its new meal... Without warning, Oni was kicked, Half a mile down the road. Effortlessly. Oni Recovers quick, Striking its claw at the jaeger its caught in mid flight, then snapped. The Oni Squeals in pain as its limb is twisted and broken off, Coyote throws it across the city. Oni strikes again, with its smaller claw, Coyote fails to avoid it, its thrown into coyotes chest, Coyote recovers and the Oni can see Stacker smile, exactly as the turrets aim down and unload the huge slugs into the Oni. The Oni is in peices, The few living parts try crawling away, Coyote steps on the guts of the Oni, The picks up the head and twists it clean off the shoulders. Tossing the confirmed dead creature down the street, the Jaeger turned to the Person dow below, It was a little girl, In a single Red shoe, Looking up in fear, Stacker climbed out from his harness and up onto the top of the ****pit. He removed his helmet and looked down at the little girl. Smiling. He felt blood begin to trickle from his nose, he quickly wiped it away and climbed down to speak with the child. The little girl looked up and smiled at the man. Epilogue Stacker walked into the hospital room, Tamsin lay in her hospital bed, A young girl followed Stacker into the room... It brought a smile to the Veteran Jaeger Ranger Tamsin...

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

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x_paden_x

MemberNoobMar-13-2014 9:34 PM
Month later... Nothing... I know the Jaeger fans are few, But guys... C'mon this is pretty awesome...

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

Stargate_Nerd

MemberNoobMar-14-2014 5:12 PM
While it has potential, I unfortunately find your writing pretty cringe-worthy. It's a nice start though.

x_paden_x

MemberNoobApr-21-2014 10:33 AM
@Stargate_Nerd , Everyone writes differently... Also unfortunately, This planned series has been abandoned and cancelled.

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

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