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Something Real
MemberTrilobiteJun-22-2017 4:55 PMG:KOTM - This was an exceedingly excellent follow-up to Part One! I greatly enjoy the way in which you have paced your story up to this point - and your descriptions are quite evokative! Excellent work! Thank you ever so much for taking the time to share this with us! :)
Blackwinter-witch
MemberPraetorianJun-22-2017 7:39 PMVERY interesting and well-done, the way you paint things, you can almost smell the mud and the rain!!
IN SPACE THERE IS NO WARNING
VivisectedEngineer
MemberChestbursterJun-22-2017 10:00 PMReally enjoying reading this! I can really relate to Johnson because I walk around talking to myself and to inanimate objects that same way, lol.
I love how ominous and foreboding your setting feels. Johnson was smart not to get close to the facehugger plant/egg! ...But I wonder if it's already too late for him, I wonder if he already got infected by those spores.
Very suspenseful! Looking forward to your updates!!